When I first read this sentence:
In Modern Fascism Veith relies on Postman to show how electronic media, particularly television, has eroded linear logic, sustained inquiry, tradition, and deferred gratification.
I thought it meant:
In Modern Fascism Veith relies on Postman to show how electronic media, particularly television, has:
- eroded linear logic,
- sustained inquiry,
- tradition, and
- deferred gratification.
In Modern Fascism Veith relies on Postman to show how electronic media, particularly television, has eroded:
From a post by Marcel.
- linear logic,
- sustained inquiry,
- tradition, and
- deferred gratification.
From a post by Marcel.
I would have put a colon after 'eroded' to disambiguate it.
ReplyDeleteI would have turned it into a paragraph, but then I would have spaced out half way through and left the reader wondering what the heck I was talking about.
ReplyDeleteInteresting that the author is a professor of communications.
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